tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-936203603674732924.post822605741533559774..comments2024-02-17T15:20:06.632+01:00Comments on Urban Adventure in Rotterdam: A ship adrift - erasure poetryuair01http://www.blogger.com/profile/14538242264866015155noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-936203603674732924.post-19586211615390422382012-08-22T06:55:13.728+02:002012-08-22T06:55:13.728+02:00Petr
Great Post! This poem is addictive. I keep c...Petr<br />Great Post! This poem is addictive. I keep coming back to it. Conjures images of an IA/dentity... Innocent & sensual. Perhaps the poetics of proto-singularity ;) Erasure IA creating Buddha, God the Devil and nonsensical sensuality.<br /><br />Erased again <br />I released my grip<br />A spiritless ship<br />I behaved beautifully with earth <br />Flowed something Buddha <br />Like a pair of shadow<br />For meaning by expanding<br />God is Faithfuland had he came today.<br />Is you coming sir?<br />At last bit of course<br />I know you projected devil was<br />Only too old, <br />Your unbuttoned uniform, catching<br />In love with end<br />Original fastened us in favor<br />Some, perfectly here, yet.<br />Exploring perfectly<br />We won't.<br /><br />That was fun!<br /><br /><br /><br /> Joyce J.https://www.blogger.com/profile/06416115413334780486noreply@blogger.com